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  • Ben 10 Mary Sue Test ver.2



    Name


    1. Is the character named after you? [5]

    2. Is the character named after a canon character? [4]

    3. Is the name unusual for the character's country or world?[2](ex: Reverie-Alba Draco Mashiro Snowbloom)

    4.A random name you just made up?[1]

    5. A normal name, but spelled differently? [1]

    6. Does the name have some special meanings? [1]
    (ex: Penumbra means a shadowy or indefinite area)

    7. Does he/she have any special title or nickname that makes the character sound cooler?[1]
    (ex: Lyra the Blue Moon)

    8. Does your character's name rhyme with any sort of number intentionally? [1]
    • Is this number 10? [3]


    • Is it 11? [2]


    • Does this person's last name also rhyme with that number, or has the number in it somewhere? [1]


    • Does the character have this naming scheme despite not being related to any of the main characters at all? [1]


    Appearance


    1. Does your character look the same as a character from the actual show, except for hair and eye color? [3](ex: cfile207.uf.daum.net/image/110…

    2. Is your character a gender-bender version of a canon character?[8]

    3. Does your character share any physical characteristic with a canon character?[3]

    4. Does your character share any physical characteristic with you? [2]

    5. Does your character look much younger than he/she really is?[1]

    6. Does the character dress in a manner you find particularly like? [1]
    • Clothes that you usually wear?[2]

    • Clothes that make the character look sexy?[1]

    • Clothes that you've ever wanted to wear?[2]


    7. Does he/she have an unusual hair/eye color like anime characters do? [1]
    • More than one hair color?[1]

    • Red eyes?[1]

    • Mismatched eyes? [1]
    (ex: one is blue, and one is yellow)
    • Do his/her eyes have something to do with his/her hidden power? [1]


    8. Is your character described as exceptionally beautiful? [3]

    9. Does your character have a nice body shape?[3]
    • It always stays the same, no matter how much he/she eats?[1]


    Character


    1. Is your character…
    • Nice to everyone?[2]

    • Lively and cheerful?[1]

    • Free-spirited?[1]

    • Loyal?[1]

    • Modest?[1]

    • Generous?[1]

    • Well-mannered?[1]

    • Careful?[1]

    • Very responsible?[1]

    • Innocent?[2]

    • Courageous?[2]

    • Quick-witted?[1]

    • Hard-working?[1]

    • More rational than others?[2]

    • Strong and tough?[2]

    • Rebellious to authority?[3]

    • (female only)A tomboy?[1]

    • A perfectionist?[2]

    • A good negotiator?[3]

    • A fast learner?[2]

    • A great problem solver?[3]

    • A lone wolf?[2]

    • A "kickass"? [5]


    2. Does he/she share some same characteristics or hobbies with a canon character? [3]

    3. Is your character a clone of somebody? [1]
    • A canon character?[5]


    4. Is your character a robot? [3]
    • An android?[1]

    • Can he/she think for himself/herself?[1]

    • Does he/she have emotions?[1]

    • Can he/she turn into a weapon?[1]


    5. Does the character speak in a rough manner?[1]
    • Other people don't mind about how he/she says at all?[1]

    • And do they think the character is a "badass"? [5]

    • Does your character often use words that are inappropriate for kids show?[8]
    (ex: the F-word, s**t, b***h)

    6. Does everybody like your character? [2]

    7. Does everybody hate your character?[1]

    8. Is your character rich?[1]
    • Without having a job?[2]

    • Is the wealth inherited from his/her parents?[1]

    • Your character doesn't tell others about his/her wealth because he/she wants true friends?[1]


    9. Does this character have any personal vehicle? [1]
    • A fancy sports car?[1]

    • A motorcycle? [1]

    • A jet? [3]

    • A spaceship?[3]

    • Can any of them transform into something else, such as a submarine? [2]

    • Is the vehicle personally modified with special gadgets or alien tech? [2]


    10. Does this character have any pet?[1]
    • Earth animal that is unusual to be a pet?[1]
    (ex: a wolf, a tiger, a panda, a venomous snake, a deer, etc)
    • An alien pet, like Ship?[2]

    • A mythical creature?[3]
    (ex: a dragon, a chimera, a phoenix, etc)
    • Does the pet completely understand what its owner says?(or vice versa?) [1]

    • Does it have any special ability to help its owner who is in trouble?[1]


    Background


    1. Does your character have an unusually tragic or complexed past? [3]

    2. Does your character have a past that is suspiciously similar to one of the characters in the show?[3]
    • Did he/she grow up on the streets, like Kevin?[1]


    3. Is your character a part of a royal family?[1]
    • A rebellious prince/princess who doesn't follow the tradition of monarchy? [1]

    • A good-hearted prince/princess who loves going adventures?[1]

    • A king/queen who rules a country, a planet, or a galaxy? [1]


    4. Is your character a Plumber?[1]
    • After having almost no experience with aliens and not even going to a Plumber's Academy?[5]

    • Were his/her parents Plumbers as well?[1]

    • If they have only been a Plumber for a short time, are they already considered one of the best? [3]

    • Are they considered better than Ben, Gwen, and Kevin? [5]


    5. The character's parents are…
    • Dead[3]

    • Missing[2]

    • Alive, but they don't bother him/her at all. [2]

    • Overly restrictive[1]


    Plot


    1.Does your character make an appearance at the very first beginning of the story?[2]

    2. Is he/she greatly important throughout your story?[2]
    • More important than Ben, Gwen, and Kevin? [1]


    3. Is your character acquainted with Ben Tennyson, Gwen Tennyson, or Kevin Levin? [1]
    • All three? [1]

    • Is she/he their friend? [2]

    • Are they part of the core team somehow? [3]


    4. Do Ben, Gwen, and Kevin all trust your character when they meet him/her?[1]
    • Despite the circumstances of the situation making it so they really shouldn't?[3]

    • Does your character end up being accepted into the main circle within days of meeting the team? [2]

    • Hours? [2]

    • Minutes? [2]

    • Immediately?[4]


    5. Does your character lose the whole memory in your story?[3]
    • Still can fluently speak and write? [1]

    • No problem with any normal activity? [1]

    • Knows how to use his/her superpower, even right after the character lost the memory? [1]

    • After losing the memory, has your character's personality changed?[1]


    6. Does your character get targeted/kidnapped by a villain?[1]
    • Does a canon character save him/her?[2]

    • Does the character escape from the villain by himself/herself?[3]


    7. Does your character often save canon characters? [2]

    8. If this character is a villain…
    • Is he/she powerful enough to be considered one of the main threats to Ben, Gwen, and Kevin?[2]

    • Is he/she even stronger than Vilgax?[5]

    • Does he/she turn good eventually? [3]


    9. Does everyone who hates him/her end up humiliated, beaten up, arrested or dead? [5]
    • By your character?[3]


    Love Interest


    1. Does any canon character fall in love with your character?[3]
    • Immediately? [5]

    • Is the person one of the main characters? [3]

    • Is the person Ben?[2]

    • Do they kiss? [3]

    • Does the canon character break up with his/her previous lover before/after meeting your character? [5]


    2. Does your character have a sex with a canon character? [8]
    • Has your character ever raped the canon character (or vice versa)? [10]

    • Does your character often sexually harass the canon character?(or vice versa)?[5]


    3. Does a canon character become your character's slave or pet? [10]

    4. If the lover is an original character, is he/she your ideal type?[6]

    5. Is there anybody else who loves your character? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 2 points for each)

    6. Do the character's love interests fight over him/her?

    Superpowers


    1. Does your character have an Omnitrix/Ultimatrix?[5]
    • Is this Omnitrix pretty much the same thing as Ben's, only a different color and name?[1]

    • Is it all around better and more powerful than Ben's Omnitrix?[3]

    • Does the character know how to use it right off the bat?[3]

    • Was your character's Omnitrix built by Azmuth, despite the fact that he clearly stated that there cannot be another Omnitrix in the universe?[2]

    • Did Azmuth entrust your human character with the Omnitrix? [2]


    2. The character doesn't have an Omnitrix/Ultimatrix, but he/she can transform into something?[2]
    • Into one kind of alien?[1]

    (ex: Alan Albright from the actual show can turn into a Pyronite whenever he wants)
    • Into a mythical creature, such as a dragon and a fairy?[1]

    • Into more than one things?[2]

    • All the aliens Ben transforms into?[8]


    3. Is your character an Anodite? [1]
    • Anodite/human hybrid? [3]

    • Did he/she start off as a human before discovering their Anodite powers? [1]

    • If so, is this character better at using their powers than Gwen? [3]

    • Is your character a special type of Anodite that is far more powerful than a normal Anodite, with no balancing downsides?[3]


    4. Is your character an Osmosian? [1]
    • Osmosian/human hybrid? [3]

    • Can your character turn into pure liquid or gaseous substances by touching them? [3]

    • Does this character absorb energy?[2]

    • And his/her sanity is not affected by doing it at all? [8]


    5. Is your character any other kind of alien hybrid? [1]
    • A Human/alien hybrid?[2]

    • A hybrid of more than two species?[5]

    • Does he/she have all the strengths of their alien, but none of the weaknesses?[8]

    • Does the character look much like a human without wearing an I.D mask?[1]
    (ex: cfile202.uf.daum.net/image/181… )
    • Do they retain aspects of their human form as an alien that are odd for the species, but only ones that make them seem less ugly? (Human hair, humanoid shape, etc.)

    • Is their alien side something that doesn't make sense, such as a Celestialsapien?[10]


    6. Is your character a pure alien? [1]
    • A humanoid?[1]


    7. Is your character a mutant? [1]
    • Does he/she still look like a normal person? [3]


    8. Does your character use magic?[1]
    • Does he/she use various magic items, like Charmcaster does?[1]

    • Does he/she memorize all of his/her spells?[1]

    • Is he/she able to control the Master Magician's Staff?
    ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Master_Ma… [3]
    • Is the character more skilled in magic than Gwen, Charmcaster, or Hex? [3]


    9. Is your character immortal? [7]
    • Some sort of magical creatures, such as a vampire and a werewolf?[2]

    • A god/goddess? [13]


    10. Does he/she have any other superpower? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 3 points for each)

    Other Abilities


    1. Is your character athletically talented?[1]
    • Great at any sports?


    2. Is your character highly intelligent?[1]
    • A genius? [2]

    • A hacker? [1]

    • Can he/she build several devices by himself/herself?[3]


    3. Is your character fluent in more than two languages?[1]

    4. Can he/she sing or play any musical instrument very well?[1]
    • Is he/she a professional musician/singer?[1]

    • Does he/she have many fans?[1]


    5. Is your character good at hand-to-hand combat?[1]

    6. Does your character have a considerable knowledge and experience in alien tech? [1]

    7. Does your character ever take down a villain more easily than Ben, Gwen, or Kevin ever could?[2]
    • Does the character take one down that it took the main cast a whole episode to beat in a single short fight?[1]

    • One that it took the main cast an entire season to beat? [2]

    • More than a season? [3]

    • One that they haven't been able to defeat yet?[3]


    8. Does he/she have any other special ability? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 1 points for each)

    Flaws/Weaknesses


    1. Is your character…
    • Selfish?[-3]

    • Arrogant?[-3]

    • Lazy?[-3]

    • Air-headed?[-4]

    • Prejudiced?[-5]

    • Scatter-brained?[-3]

    • Too stubborn?[-3]

    • Careless?[-3]

    • Rude?[-3]

    • Too passive?[-3]

    • Paranoid?[-5]

    • Greedy?[-4]

    • Powerless?[-4]

    • Totally dependent on somebody?[-5]

    • Dirty?[-7]

    • Addicted to something?[-5]

    • A coward?[-7]

    • A snob?[-8]

    • A hypocrite?[-10]

    • A crybaby?[-7]

    • A yes-man?[-10]

    • A mama's boy/girl?[-10]

    • A spoiled child?[-6]

    • A stereotypical nerd or geek?[-5]

    • A weirdo?[-5]

    • A creep? [-5]

    • Sometimes a jerk?[-5]

    • A bully?[-7]


    2. Is your character jealous of somebody? [-5]
    • Has he/she ever tried to get rid of the person?[-3]

    • But failed?[-3]

    • If so, does your character end up humiliated or ruined?[-5]


    3. Is your character overly competitive? [-5]
    • Does he/she even cheat to win?[-3]


    4. Does your character look ugly in your opinion? [-5]
    • Fat? [-10]

    • Bald? [-10]


    5. Does your character look much older than he/she actually is?[-7]

    6. Do others frequently…
    • Ignore your character?

    • Totally forget about him/her?

    • Consider him/her annoying?

    (note: -10 points for each)

    7. Has he/she ever lied to somebody?[-3]
    • Often?[-2]

    • Is the character a con-man? [-7]


    8. Does your character often cause troubles or make situations worse? [-8]

    9. Is your character good-looking just because of…
    • Plastic surgeries?

    • Make-up?

    • Wig or stuffed bra?

    (note: -15 points for each)

    10. Does he/she have any other weakness? If so, how many of them?
    (note: -2 points for each)

    The Relationship between the Character and You


    1. Have you ever wished your character to appear in the actual show?[1]

    2. When somebody criticizes your character, do you feel insulted?[3]

    3. Do you think your character is an ideal version of yourself?[5]
NOTE:
1. The original is created by :iconbinkatong: [link]
2. This is incomplete, so it will be edited more.
3. You must honestly answer to the questions.
4. This test is for helping you make a well-made OC, not for intentionally offending you.
5. If you have any ideas, please let me know.


Score:

-10 or less: Too much flaws. Add some strengths to the character. Even if your character is an antagonist, it still needs to appeal to the readers.

-9~4: Plain. You can give your character a little more characteristics and make him/her more interesting.

5~20: Well-balanced. Nice job!

21~30: Borderline Sue. It's a little dangerous. You should add a few flaws or simplify your character a little bit. It is very important that your character should not overshadow the rest of the characters.

31~45: Mary Sue. Uh-oh. We've got a problem. You gave too many traits to your character. I believe this would help you. [link]

46 or more: Um...You've gone too far. I suggest you to make a new one.
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:iconsupercrazyfin:
SuperCrazyfin Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I got 13 :D
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IAmJynxed Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've got an exact 21. I'm guessing mine's okay...
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ImafanofTororo Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Does it count if you based the persona of your character on yourself, and added the Omnitrix onto him/her?
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
He/she may get some points for that, but that doesn't automatically make the characters a Sue.
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LovelyDistantStars Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I have a question on Number 3 and 5 on Background, What if the character is a royal who has been BANNED from the country/galaxy for a misunderstood reason and has a bad rep because of that and the other question is that that character's father got murdered BY the mother for greed purposes and has traumatized the character? Do I take off points on the character? Or should I add? PLEASE LEMME KNOW ;O;
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LeCockerSpaniel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Lol I taked it and I got 13.
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Samantha-Deathwish Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gawd... I've seen pretty AWFUL Ben 10 Mary Sues! They're annoying! They're damn stupid!

From this forth, I shall make a GOOD Ben 10 OC! Am scribbling now!
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SoNoEcho Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
27?! Oh, poop. :ohmygod:
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Galvanchick Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Whew I made it ;D 19 I'm glad that my OC is not a Mary Sue!
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Congrats! You did a great job:D
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