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  • Ben 10 Mary Sue Test ver.2


    1. Is the character named after you? [5]

    2. Is the character named after a canon character? [4]

    3. Is the name unusual for the character's country or world?[2](ex: Reverie-Alba Draco Mashiro Snowbloom)

    4.A random name you just made up?[1]

    5. A normal name, but spelled differently? [1]

    6. Does the name have some special meanings? [1]
    (ex: Penumbra means a shadowy or indefinite area)

    7. Does he/she have any special title or nickname that makes the character sound cooler?[1]
    (ex: Lyra the Blue Moon)

    8. Does your character's name rhyme with any sort of number intentionally? [1]
    • Is this number 10? [3]

    • Is it 11? [2]

    • Does this person's last name also rhyme with that number, or has the number in it somewhere? [1]

    • Does the character have this naming scheme despite not being related to any of the main characters at all? [1]


    1. Does your character look the same as a character from the actual show, except for hair and eye color? [3](ex:…

    2. Is your character a gender-bender version of a canon character?[8]

    3. Does your character share any physical characteristic with a canon character?[3]

    4. Does your character share any physical characteristic with you? [2]

    5. Does your character look much younger than he/she really is?[1]

    6. Does the character dress in a manner you find particularly like? [1]
    • Clothes that you usually wear?[2]

    • Clothes that make the character look sexy?[1]

    • Clothes that you've ever wanted to wear?[2]

    7. Does he/she have an unusual hair/eye color like anime characters do? [1]
    • More than one hair color?[1]

    • Red eyes?[1]

    • Mismatched eyes? [1]
    (ex: one is blue, and one is yellow)
    • Do his/her eyes have something to do with his/her hidden power? [1]

    8. Is your character described as exceptionally beautiful? [3]

    9. Does your character have a nice body shape?[3]
    • It always stays the same, no matter how much he/she eats?[1]


    1. Is your character…
    • Nice to everyone?[2]

    • Lively and cheerful?[1]

    • Free-spirited?[1]

    • Loyal?[1]

    • Modest?[1]

    • Generous?[1]

    • Well-mannered?[1]

    • Careful?[1]

    • Very responsible?[1]

    • Innocent?[2]

    • Courageous?[2]

    • Quick-witted?[1]

    • Hard-working?[1]

    • More rational than others?[2]

    • Strong and tough?[2]

    • Rebellious to authority?[3]

    • (female only)A tomboy?[1]

    • A perfectionist?[2]

    • A good negotiator?[3]

    • A fast learner?[2]

    • A great problem solver?[3]

    • A lone wolf?[2]

    • A "kickass"? [5]

    2. Does he/she share some same characteristics or hobbies with a canon character? [3]

    3. Is your character a clone of somebody? [1]
    • A canon character?[5]

    4. Is your character a robot? [3]
    • An android?[1]

    • Can he/she think for himself/herself?[1]

    • Does he/she have emotions?[1]

    • Can he/she turn into a weapon?[1]

    5. Does the character speak in a rough manner?[1]
    • Other people don't mind about how he/she says at all?[1]

    • And do they think the character is a "badass"? [5]

    • Does your character often use words that are inappropriate for kids show?[8]
    (ex: the F-word, s**t, b***h)

    6. Does everybody like your character? [2]

    7. Does everybody hate your character?[1]

    8. Is your character rich?[1]
    • Without having a job?[2]

    • Is the wealth inherited from his/her parents?[1]

    • Your character doesn't tell others about his/her wealth because he/she wants true friends?[1]

    9. Does this character have any personal vehicle? [1]
    • A fancy sports car?[1]

    • A motorcycle? [1]

    • A jet? [3]

    • A spaceship?[3]

    • Can any of them transform into something else, such as a submarine? [2]

    • Is the vehicle personally modified with special gadgets or alien tech? [2]

    10. Does this character have any pet?[1]
    • Earth animal that is unusual to be a pet?[1]
    (ex: a wolf, a tiger, a panda, a venomous snake, a deer, etc)
    • An alien pet, like Ship?[2]

    • A mythical creature?[3]
    (ex: a dragon, a chimera, a phoenix, etc)
    • Does the pet completely understand what its owner says?(or vice versa?) [1]

    • Does it have any special ability to help its owner who is in trouble?[1]


    1. Does your character have an unusually tragic or complexed past? [3]

    2. Does your character have a past that is suspiciously similar to one of the characters in the show?[3]
    • Did he/she grow up on the streets, like Kevin?[1]

    3. Is your character a part of a royal family?[1]
    • A rebellious prince/princess who doesn't follow the tradition of monarchy? [1]

    • A good-hearted prince/princess who loves going adventures?[1]

    • A king/queen who rules a country, a planet, or a galaxy? [1]

    4. Is your character a Plumber?[1]
    • After having almost no experience with aliens and not even going to a Plumber's Academy?[5]

    • Were his/her parents Plumbers as well?[1]

    • If they have only been a Plumber for a short time, are they already considered one of the best? [3]

    • Are they considered better than Ben, Gwen, and Kevin? [5]

    5. The character's parents are…
    • Dead[3]

    • Missing[2]

    • Alive, but they don't bother him/her at all. [2]

    • Overly restrictive[1]


    1.Does your character make an appearance at the very first beginning of the story?[2]

    2. Is he/she greatly important throughout your story?[2]
    • More important than Ben, Gwen, and Kevin? [1]

    3. Is your character acquainted with Ben Tennyson, Gwen Tennyson, or Kevin Levin? [1]
    • All three? [1]

    • Is she/he their friend? [2]

    • Are they part of the core team somehow? [3]

    4. Do Ben, Gwen, and Kevin all trust your character when they meet him/her?[1]
    • Despite the circumstances of the situation making it so they really shouldn't?[3]

    • Does your character end up being accepted into the main circle within days of meeting the team? [2]

    • Hours? [2]

    • Minutes? [2]

    • Immediately?[4]

    5. Does your character lose the whole memory in your story?[3]
    • Still can fluently speak and write? [1]

    • No problem with any normal activity? [1]

    • Knows how to use his/her superpower, even right after the character lost the memory? [1]

    • After losing the memory, has your character's personality changed?[1]

    6. Does your character get targeted/kidnapped by a villain?[1]
    • Does a canon character save him/her?[2]

    • Does the character escape from the villain by himself/herself?[3]

    7. Does your character often save canon characters? [2]

    8. If this character is a villain…
    • Is he/she powerful enough to be considered one of the main threats to Ben, Gwen, and Kevin?[2]

    • Is he/she even stronger than Vilgax?[5]

    • Does he/she turn good eventually? [3]

    9. Does everyone who hates him/her end up humiliated, beaten up, arrested or dead? [5]
    • By your character?[3]

    Love Interest

    1. Does any canon character fall in love with your character?[3]
    • Immediately? [5]

    • Is the person one of the main characters? [3]

    • Is the person Ben?[2]

    • Do they kiss? [3]

    • Does the canon character break up with his/her previous lover before/after meeting your character? [5]

    2. Does your character have a sex with a canon character? [8]
    • Has your character ever raped the canon character (or vice versa)? [10]

    • Does your character often sexually harass the canon character?(or vice versa)?[5]

    3. Does a canon character become your character's slave or pet? [10]

    4. If the lover is an original character, is he/she your ideal type?[6]

    5. Is there anybody else who loves your character? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 2 points for each)

    6. Do the character's love interests fight over him/her?


    1. Does your character have an Omnitrix/Ultimatrix?[5]
    • Is this Omnitrix pretty much the same thing as Ben's, only a different color and name?[1]

    • Is it all around better and more powerful than Ben's Omnitrix?[3]

    • Does the character know how to use it right off the bat?[3]

    • Was your character's Omnitrix built by Azmuth, despite the fact that he clearly stated that there cannot be another Omnitrix in the universe?[2]

    • Did Azmuth entrust your human character with the Omnitrix? [2]

    2. The character doesn't have an Omnitrix/Ultimatrix, but he/she can transform into something?[2]
    • Into one kind of alien?[1]

    (ex: Alan Albright from the actual show can turn into a Pyronite whenever he wants)
    • Into a mythical creature, such as a dragon and a fairy?[1]

    • Into more than one things?[2]

    • All the aliens Ben transforms into?[8]

    3. Is your character an Anodite? [1]
    • Anodite/human hybrid? [3]

    • Did he/she start off as a human before discovering their Anodite powers? [1]

    • If so, is this character better at using their powers than Gwen? [3]

    • Is your character a special type of Anodite that is far more powerful than a normal Anodite, with no balancing downsides?[3]

    4. Is your character an Osmosian? [1]
    • Osmosian/human hybrid? [3]

    • Can your character turn into pure liquid or gaseous substances by touching them? [3]

    • Does this character absorb energy?[2]

    • And his/her sanity is not affected by doing it at all? [8]

    5. Is your character any other kind of alien hybrid? [1]
    • A Human/alien hybrid?[2]

    • A hybrid of more than two species?[5]

    • Does he/she have all the strengths of their alien, but none of the weaknesses?[8]

    • Does the character look much like a human without wearing an I.D mask?[1]
    (ex:… )
    • Do they retain aspects of their human form as an alien that are odd for the species, but only ones that make them seem less ugly? (Human hair, humanoid shape, etc.)

    • Is their alien side something that doesn't make sense, such as a Celestialsapien?[10]

    6. Is your character a pure alien? [1]
    • A humanoid?[1]

    7. Is your character a mutant? [1]
    • Does he/she still look like a normal person? [3]

    8. Does your character use magic?[1]
    • Does he/she use various magic items, like Charmcaster does?[1]

    • Does he/she memorize all of his/her spells?[1]

    • Is he/she able to control the Master Magician's Staff?… [3]
    • Is the character more skilled in magic than Gwen, Charmcaster, or Hex? [3]

    9. Is your character immortal? [7]
    • Some sort of magical creatures, such as a vampire and a werewolf?[2]

    • A god/goddess? [13]

    10. Does he/she have any other superpower? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 3 points for each)

    Other Abilities

    1. Is your character athletically talented?[1]
    • Great at any sports?

    2. Is your character highly intelligent?[1]
    • A genius? [2]

    • A hacker? [1]

    • Can he/she build several devices by himself/herself?[3]

    3. Is your character fluent in more than two languages?[1]

    4. Can he/she sing or play any musical instrument very well?[1]
    • Is he/she a professional musician/singer?[1]

    • Does he/she have many fans?[1]

    5. Is your character good at hand-to-hand combat?[1]

    6. Does your character have a considerable knowledge and experience in alien tech? [1]

    7. Does your character ever take down a villain more easily than Ben, Gwen, or Kevin ever could?[2]
    • Does the character take one down that it took the main cast a whole episode to beat in a single short fight?[1]

    • One that it took the main cast an entire season to beat? [2]

    • More than a season? [3]

    • One that they haven't been able to defeat yet?[3]

    8. Does he/she have any other special ability? If so, how many of them?
    (note: 1 points for each)


    1. Is your character…
    • Selfish?[-3]

    • Arrogant?[-3]

    • Lazy?[-3]

    • Air-headed?[-4]

    • Prejudiced?[-5]

    • Scatter-brained?[-3]

    • Too stubborn?[-3]

    • Careless?[-3]

    • Rude?[-3]

    • Too passive?[-3]

    • Paranoid?[-5]

    • Greedy?[-4]

    • Powerless?[-4]

    • Totally dependent on somebody?[-5]

    • Dirty?[-7]

    • Addicted to something?[-5]

    • A coward?[-7]

    • A snob?[-8]

    • A hypocrite?[-10]

    • A crybaby?[-7]

    • A yes-man?[-10]

    • A mama's boy/girl?[-10]

    • A spoiled child?[-6]

    • A stereotypical nerd or geek?[-5]

    • A weirdo?[-5]

    • A creep? [-5]

    • Sometimes a jerk?[-5]

    • A bully?[-7]

    2. Is your character jealous of somebody? [-5]
    • Has he/she ever tried to get rid of the person?[-3]

    • But failed?[-3]

    • If so, does your character end up humiliated or ruined?[-5]

    3. Is your character overly competitive? [-5]
    • Does he/she even cheat to win?[-3]

    4. Does your character look ugly in your opinion? [-5]
    • Fat? [-10]

    • Bald? [-10]

    5. Does your character look much older than he/she actually is?[-7]

    6. Do others frequently…
    • Ignore your character?

    • Totally forget about him/her?

    • Consider him/her annoying?

    (note: -10 points for each)

    7. Has he/she ever lied to somebody?[-3]
    • Often?[-2]

    • Is the character a con-man? [-7]

    8. Does your character often cause troubles or make situations worse? [-8]

    9. Is your character good-looking just because of…
    • Plastic surgeries?

    • Make-up?

    • Wig or stuffed bra?

    (note: -15 points for each)

    10. Does he/she have any other weakness? If so, how many of them?
    (note: -2 points for each)

    The Relationship between the Character and You

    1. Have you ever wished your character to appear in the actual show?[1]

    2. When somebody criticizes your character, do you feel insulted?[3]

    3. Do you think your character is an ideal version of yourself?[5]
1. The original is created by :iconbinkatong: [link]
2. This is incomplete, so it will be edited more.
3. You must honestly answer to the questions.
4. This test is for helping you make a well-made OC, not for intentionally offending you.
5. If you have any ideas, please let me know.


-10 or less: Too much flaws. Add some strengths to the character. Even if your character is an antagonist, it still needs to appeal to the readers.

-9~4: Plain. You can give your character a little more characteristics and make him/her more interesting.

5~20: Well-balanced. Nice job!

21~30: Borderline Sue. It's a little dangerous. You should add a few flaws or simplify your character a little bit. It is very important that your character should not overshadow the rest of the characters.

31~45: Mary Sue. Uh-oh. We've got a problem. You gave too many traits to your character. I believe this would help you. [link]

46 or more: Um...You've gone too far. I suggest you to make a new one.
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IAmJynxed Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Retook it for a different OC, and got 13. Yay :)
SuperCrazyfin Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I got 13 :D
IAmJynxed Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've got an exact 21. I'm guessing mine's okay...
ImafanofTororo Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Does it count if you based the persona of your character on yourself, and added the Omnitrix onto him/her?
CheshireP Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
He/she may get some points for that, but that doesn't automatically make the characters a Sue.
LovelyDistantStars Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I have a question on Number 3 and 5 on Background, What if the character is a royal who has been BANNED from the country/galaxy for a misunderstood reason and has a bad rep because of that and the other question is that that character's father got murdered BY the mother for greed purposes and has traumatized the character? Do I take off points on the character? Or should I add? PLEASE LEMME KNOW ;O;
LeCockerSpaniel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Lol I taked it and I got 13.
Samantha-Deathwish Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gawd... I've seen pretty AWFUL Ben 10 Mary Sues! They're annoying! They're damn stupid!

From this forth, I shall make a GOOD Ben 10 OC! Am scribbling now!
SoNoEcho Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
27?! Oh, poop. :ohmygod:
Galvanchick Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Whew I made it ;D 19 I'm glad that my OC is not a Mary Sue!
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