Since, literally used all the eloquence at my disposal with her comment... I'll just add this: The use of color and composition in this is terrifying in it's beauty. You can feel Albedo's fear! This is excellent, my friend!
Epic job on the eyes. Albedo’s nightmare was indeed much like your fanfic idea. Ben’s was like Kevin said in “The Con of Rath”. “One of those dreams, where everyone you know is in it, and they all wanna hurt you.”