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Two evil twins by CheshireP Two evil twins by CheshireP
Actually, this fic is consisted of 2 stories. The story of 7 Bens was the first part. And now here's the last story. This time, Albedo is the main character in the story.

Gwen, Kevin, and the six Bens finally defeat the Evil Ben and activate the alien artifact. After a moment, all the seven Bens are gone, and there is only one Ben left. So Ben's gang believe that now everything is back to normal.

But few days later, Gwen and Kevin notice that Ben is acting a little strange. But there is nothing "wrong" with him. In fact, Ben has done only right things. He is just... too perfect. At first, Gwen and Kevin think that is a good change, but they soon realize that he is unrealistically capable and moral. The Perfect Ben is not the real Ben they know. Ironically, Ben is still incomplete because he doesn't have any flaws. Later, Hugh comes to Ben's gang and ask them for a help---to save Albedo.

In fact, the Evil Ben escaped from Ben's gang before the alien artifact could work. He was excited about his freedom at first, but he soon realized that his joy won't last long. Since he's just one of Ben's seven split personas, his body is too unstable and he will live for less than 9 years. Plus, his Ultimatrix is much weaker than the original Ben's. After much thinking, he finally came up with one solution. First, the Evil Ben stole the alien artifact when Ben was sleeping. And then, he possessed Albedo's body by combining Albedo and himself into one with the artifact. Now the Evil Ben has a longer life and can transform into aliens at will. Even worse, he can also build high-tech machines by using Albedo's memory whenever he wants.

Ben's gang fights the Evil Ben, but the Evil Ben is much more powerful than before. He easily defeats all of them except the Perfect Ben. After an intense battle, the Perfect Ben eventually loses, too. Things look grim to eveyone.

Luckily, Albedo's mind is still alive. After much struggles, Albedo finally regains control of his body. He separates the Evil Ben from his body by using the alien artifact. Then, the Perfect Ben activates the artifact once more. The real Ben Tennyson and Albedo are back.

Now everything is back to normal. But after this incident, Albedo disgusts his human body even more. Not only it's repulsive to him, but it also can make him lose his identity. The Evil Ben tried to use Albedo because he thought Albedo is just an evil clone of Ben. And many people think the same thing about him, too. Albedo continues finding a way to get his true form back. If Ben gets in his way, then Albedo will not hesitate to hurt him.

"I will not let you destroy my identity, Ben Tennyson! I'm not a mere copy of you. I am Albedo of the Galvan!"
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bennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2016
My evil clone stole this photo
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TashaHemlock Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015   General Artist
This is brilliant Chesire but if Dark Ben escaped and merged with Albedo what would Perfect Ben look like? Would he be wearing a white jacket?
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Miunish Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you drew him just like in the series!!! *OMGOMGOMG*
ok I'm better XD. The truth is that Albedo deserves more attention such as in this idea of yours, no one ever pays him any mind DX!
anyhow poor Albedo, he had such a hard time :(
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IAmJynxed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is epic! And totally awesome! (because Albedo is my favorite character of ALL TIME)
Just wondering, did you ever actually write the entire thing to go with this and the first story? if so, where can I find them? I want to read it SO badly!
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DSPACE1995 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist
where can I read your story? It's really interesting.
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kikigraysonwest Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
Yes. It sounds interesting. Plz tell me wyer to find it
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uni416 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student General Artist
OMG so THATS what happened!?!?

Poor Albedo never saw that one comming :P
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GoldenGirl954 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
Awesome :XD:
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XLR8E Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student General Artist
nice work!
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Thanks:D
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XLR8E Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
np
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kitofthewind Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
it'd be funny if it didnt purfectly refuse them, like it still makes the normal ben but all the emotion-bens can talk to him
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
That's gonna be literally "talking to himself":laughing:
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kitofthewind Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
I can imagine ben being in a fight and all the other bens either trying to help or saying they could do better
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
That would be interesting if such thing happened
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kitofthewind Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011
or heck what if he could use the omnitrix to temporarily trade out with one of the other bens.

also on a random note is the incomplete ben diffrently colored like the others?
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
That's good, too
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kitofthewind Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011
:P
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DivineROAR Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Professional General Artist
Cool!
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Thank you:D
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InnocentGraces Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Like the idea!
So, will you, like, write a fanfic about it?
I wanna read it if you do!
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truehero10 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
Epic!
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Thanks:D
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matanui2001 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy Man Of Action, That's epic! Great idea!!!!!!!!!
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Thank you^^
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matanui2001 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are most welcome.
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gryphonslade Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
jfdklfjas;lkfjdsa;goa8jd;lfaks. This sounds awesome.
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Thanks:)
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deviantdeath6910 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
This is a pretty cool fanfic. Very original :D
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AwesomeGirl999 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Do you have a link to this fan fic?
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CheshireP Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
Thank you:D
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deviantdeath6910 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
np
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